User blog comment:JessieLovesStuff/what do you think???/@comment-1724134-20100203191835

take time to explain how you are feeling. If you just wrote that because you were bored there is defenately ssome great talent underneath your skin. So just a recap: YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER take time to explain what the man looks like, what his facial expressions are saying rmember not to rush the story otherwise it will only b a few pages long. You are great!!!

~`~"JacobRocks"~`~