Talk:Maggie/@comment-1642927-20100424164158

I edited the Breaking Dawn section of this. I try to keep the flow of the previous edit by the user, but it's hard. I would not word it that way and I think trying to do so makes it a little uneven. But I don't want to trash on that person's edit and completely rewrite how I think it should be. And thus, my unneeded explanation shall end.