User blog comment:Puddinginthesky/Opinions?/@comment-2072316-20110425202505

Yes, it is a very good prologue, regarding the first piece, but you might want to.. I mean, when the text is too descriptive, it gets tiring to focus and think of what certain words mean and easily find their meaning in the context. However, when there's dynamic description, I feel like I'm brought to where the action took place. About the second, hmm... vague, but true. I particularly like "We find ourselves baffled by the actions and emotions of humanity, including our own." Very nicely done.