User talk:TeamTaycobsessiveObnoxiousMoronicBlackNike'sGirl/@comment-3984470-20120930212417

If anything, I'm confusing, lmao.

I made Bella go, "You know what, grow up already" because I felt like it needed to be done, but the only reason why she left was because she was pissed at him. She wanted to have fun, too. At the time I was re-reading Glass by Ellen Hopkins, and the main character (who had a baby) was like, "Fuck this, I need to get back in the game." I wanted Bella to have an aspect like that. Also, she was like, "If Edward can do it, why can't I?" I thought she'd be better too but some things just don't change (including Jake's love for Bella). :/

AND HOW WAS HE ADORABLE OMG HOW. Really, he's only doing this because he wants to control her. He was like, "She knew too much; maybe this would bring her back down to wear she belongs" or something. I do agree though. When he's bad, he's bad. But when he's good, no one's better. (Lana lyric reference ["Ghetto Baby" ftw.]) That was the dark and abusive Edward, or that was at least what I was trying to make him sound like. HOW IS HE KIND. HOOOWWW. What'd you think of Jake?

I agree; I wouldn't do that myself. But for me it was an "lol that's so Bella." Crazy? CRAZY? THIS ISN'T CRAZY. Lmfao.

And yes, I know I use that phrase a lot. I make a point to. You like your fanfics insane.

And lol yeah. But this is a longer comment. ;D