User talk:Twihard-fanpire/@comment-2072316-20100823093946

okay,even though this chapter was short,much to my dismay,i have to say,it is a cliffhanger.And I don't know...just a bit of..constructive criticism:shouldn't Seth be a little more...I don't know..imprinting is supposed to be..like your world revolves around that one person.If she died,wouldn't Seth be devastated?I remember when Jacob was starting to freak out in Breaking Dawn,checking Renesmee's heart to see if she was okay.Now,it's just my opinion,I still love the story.Chapter five soon..Please!!