User talk:Twihard-fanpire/@comment-2072316-20100823093946/@comment-2209002-20100823160449

Oh, I totally know what you mean. [chapter 4 picks up again in chapter 6 with grace's point of view :) ] And about seth being devastated... he totally would be! In the beginning of the chapter, thought it was short, I tried to make him feel super happy and this care-free guy who finally found his match in the world, then, as the chapter goes on, he really realizes what's going on, and his mood is dampered.... okay and more on the revolving around the imprintee thing, as I was writing, I thought that I should just have Seth tell Grace about the werewolf thing right then and there at the tidepools, but then I thought, 'wouldn't the not being able to tell others about werewolves "rule" still be in effect?'.  So, he will eventually tell her, just he needed jake's permission before he could do so. Thanks for the criticism! It really does help in the writing process! :)

Oh, and on a different note, chapter 5 is in the editing stage so it should be out soon!!! :)