User blog comment:TeamTaycobSoDealWithIt/If You Had Written the Twilight Saga....?/@comment-1642927-20110530165650

I would change quite a few things, mostly minor, but a list like that is too long. One thing that needed to happen was some sort of sacrifice made by Bella. Another would be that some battle would've happened at the end of Breaking Dawn. And ultimately somebody would have to die. I hated the anti-climatic ending to BD. Maybe Esme, Carlisle, or even... Alice.