User talk:Carmen Maestro/@comment-3984470-20120418140807/@comment-5020304-20120420040422

I thought it was very well-written. Bella was much more peppy than Meyer portrays her, which I liked. I also liked how it was very descriptive, almost lyrical. I felt you had nailed Jacob's feelings for Bella and how he believed he was better for her than Edward. What I didn't like was that most of the time, it was kittens and rainbows for Bella and Jacob. I mean, Jella kisses/hugs are hot to the touch but I believe adding some drama to the mix would've made it a bit more interesting. After all, Jella isn't Bedward. I loved it! :)