User talk:TwilightReaderFan/@comment-7600752-20140907030235

Okay Sethnesmee...

I would truly like your feedback. I'm still in the process of trying to take it down off of fanficion. I'm going to radically change it to fit the story I'm working on now. So, what you read will be the second half of the story I'm working on at the moment. When I'm done - it will no longer be a Twilight Fanfic.

I just checked and it's still up. Here is where you can read it: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9574565/1/The-Forgotten-Child

I have no idea if this story is the updated one or not. But remember to endure the beginning because it's just dealing with elements of Twilight that Meyer left kinda open. Jacob and Renesmee are mentioned... but I didn't write about them because I really had nothing to say about them. Just keep reading until you get to Carlisle's story. :) And thanks!