User blog comment:Miika Kiryu/my friends story/@comment-81.157.179.154-20091130224109

I turned to Daisuke and shoved him against the wall, using enough force to only shake him up. The wall shook with the impact; a small crack appearing behind his head. I let go and backed up slowly as he brushed the dust off his clothes/ He looked at me, smiling playfully -- Impressive, have you been working out? -- he moved to touch me, but I moved away. Oh, come on Ali, you know I was playing. -No I didn't! I said, with my teeth bared, you were going to bite her! I proclaimed. I growled through my teeth. It was very hard to get me angry; especially if you were Daisuke.

Don't you think it looks and sounds better? Looks being the operative word. Hence, you have terrible punctuation and grammar.