Talk:Victoria/@comment-121.54.54.33-20120202171442/@comment-121.54.54.61-20120225085654

Alright, fine, I concede. Your points are valid. But when I read a book narrated by a teenager, I expect it to be relatable to teenagers, both in its use of words and characterizations. Bella using overly-complicated words and ridiculously long sentences to convey simple thoughts is kind of jarring and annoying. ~P.a.C.