User talk:TwilightReaderFan/@comment-24927180-20140908030344

So, I've finished your story, and it's really good. You have a solid idea, great characters, but there are somethings that need to be fixed, corrected, or explained to me in case I'm just confused. We could talk about it on here sometime either through the comments or chat, but it's still a really good story even with the few flaws that I've found in my time reading it.