User blog comment:Puddinginthesky/SUPER IMPORTANT QUESTION for all Twilighters!/@comment-80.189.152.242-20110430123505

Good grammar is always preferable but I think that overall mistakes that arn't even sporadic throughout the book is unacceptable (what happened to editing? where are the editors????! It's not that difficult people!)

I read the latter two though I think that the line can be quite blurred sometimes. And some adult books read like they were written by a child (so I prefer some of my 'childhood' books more than them!)

I suppose. But chemistry is undefinable really, it can be different every time. THen again, I am an odd character for I have about three seconds to like a character instantly or not. It goes through love beyond all belief, life and hate. Take Afton, we don't know anything about him but I love him. Just in my mind. Leah is awesome whilst Seth is okay, he's sweet whilst I despise Bella. I am unlogical in every way.

Sometimes, I think that action scenes can be more abstract. I read one very good scene were this wolf was hunting (a vampire - hmph) but in turn was dying, it was written in a way that contained no gore but seemed rather real and cruel. It was fantastic. So I suppose it depends on the writer.

Again, depends on the author. Descriptions can be of use, sometimes of interest (read; curiousity) and others, plain unecessary.

Do you mean things like "She said shyly" - if that is overused then, yes. It gets irritating. THough some authors seem not to know this (IMO, of course - you may see it differently) seem not to know that it is OKAY just to say "He said" or "she asked". There doesn't have to be a "He growled angrily" or "She sighed dissapointedly" every single time. Not every line of dialogue must have an act of emotion tied to it.

There you go.