Talk:Breaking Dawn/@comment-66.213.24.10-20120818173924

Hey guys, I need some help and advice. I've took the time to stop focusing on my stories and decided to write a fanfic. I tried to write a twilight story that was sexy, bloody, and witty, but I'm still working out the kinks. Can you give me some advice. I mean don't bite my head off, but I just need some opinions from you true twi-hards.

The series is called Angel and Alexander's Love Story and there are five parts. Part one is already uploaded but I'm fixing some tiny errors that occurred within the story. Part two is also up, but only four chapters have been uploaded. I'm working on the rest on them. Just warning you they are rated M for a reason.

The story is about Carlisle and Esme adopting a new vampire into their family named Alexander, who is also known as the world's most feared and dangerous vampire. On the other hand, Angel had suffered horrific abuse her entire life, but now she has moved to Forks with a new life and a new family. These two fall deeply in love, but Alexander's brutal past soon comes back to haunt him.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8357904/1/Angels_and_Alexanders_Love_Story_Part_One

Part Two on the other hand, involves Alex's ex-Mate, Carmela, who comes to town and reeks havok because she wants Alex to love her, not Angel. And this is during the time, the Cullens, the wolf pack, and their allies are preparing to fight an army of one hundred newborns. And trust me, if you like Katherine from TVD and/or Victoria, then you're going to like Carmela. She has the ability of Compulsion and Subliminal Seduction.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8425385/1/Angel_and_Alexanders_Love_Story_Part_Two