Talk:Nahuel/@comment-24927180-20140524074949/@comment-24927180-20150103232458

I went back and reread, she doesn't say that she hates him, I was wrong about that.

She says: "Poor Nahuel," I murmured, and then sighed because I knew I would never be able to think badly of him after this, no matter how uncomfortable his stare made me.

To me that just came off like she wanted to dislike him, maybe that's just me, it just felt like she wanted to not like Nahuel because of his staring at Renesmee, despite the fact that Edward even says he wasn't looking at Renesmee, but was looking at Bella.

'''My frown deepened. "I noticed. I'm grateful to Nahuel for today, but all the staring was a little weird. I don't care if she is the only half-vampire he's not related to."'''

"Oh, he wasn't staring at her - he was staring at you."

So, seeing that she knows Nahuel wasn't even looking at Renesmee, I don't understand why she would want to think badly of him at all anymore, or why his stare still made her uncomfortable when the stare wasn't directed at Renesmee.

Maybe, it was just the way it was written, maybe I just took it the wrong way, but it still left a bad taste in my mouth, again that could have just been my take, I might have jumped the gun.

It was hard for me to figure out why? It just felt out of place.

Now, if Nahuel had been staring at Renesmee, that would be a whole different story, but he wasn't, and yet she still treats it like he was even after being told that he wasn't. This whole part just came off weird to me. A little too forced.

<span style="font-family:'TimesNewRoman',serif;">Maybe it was just the tone I read it in. I don't know.