User talk:TeamTaycobSoDealWithIt/@comment-4400202-20120419141956

I'll try to be honest:I finished I Know Places and I started the next one. I think you made them kiss way too fast. I mean, Jacob "needs his time", he's always to reach Bella and she is always treating him like he's not her best friend. Also, you made Jacob too decisive and bold(while kissing and talking with Bella) whereas in reality he's all awkward and cheerful. Bella is just fien, you did a good job. (I'll continue later with Jella)

Charlie and Bella's talk was just so awkward! Charlie with the beer and the remote control LMAO! But the talk was *cough so Eclipse *cough*