User blog comment:Puddinginthesky/Urgent Questions Regarding.../@comment-2072316-20110704183536

Made my day. Uh... IF she wouldn't describe everything so fully, then there wouldn't be four book, there'd barely be two. I enjoy the passages, only when she doesn't ramble with stupidity, like, exactly, how it takes her so long to figure some things out. She surprises me though. She's 17, yet she uses such, I don't know, non-teenage ways to describe something. I'm not saying she should go "It's just like you know, it's like kinda hard to explain right but, you know, like, I guess it's like, just, you know, right?" because.. well, duh.:| It should be well written, but she shouldn't dwell for ages on something. Other than than.. she might feel like a baby because they both know more about the supernatural, and she's kept out(by Edward) for her own safety, or so he says. Blah, she might be smart but she's not smart. After all, this is the girl who took ages to figure out why Jacob would be worried when she's missed from town for 3 days. So hard.