User talk:Sethnesmee/@comment-7600752-20140906231748

Hey Sethenesmee....

I finished your story. I liked it... and the idea. It was just kinda short. I also read your other story... but was lost about the characters. I'm assuming it's based on some kind of Anime? But you are a good writer. The problem that I have is coming up with an original plot or idea. The characters have to deal with some kind of problem. The thing is... around here... and most TWILIGHT fanfic, almost everything is basically a love story centering on The Cullens or the wolves. If you like... I can give you the link to my story. But... it is kinda long. It gets interesting and starts going fast after Carlisle begins his own personal story. So, if you can muddle through the first part... it gets better. Let me know. Know you're busy and all that. :)