User blog comment:TwilightReaderFan/The Forgotten Children- Twilight/@comment-7600752-20130506002438

Thank you. I appreciate your help and have corrected Carlisle's name. My auto-correct is working right, correcting things I want left, and not correcting what I do want corrected. As each story continues, you'll see it told more from Carlyle's point of view, since it's fasicly his story. Carlisle is Myer's creation, but I've tried to put a 'spin' on his character. Maybe not making his quite so perfect as he was in Myer's world. I'm open to any positive critical opinions. I've already alterated the story several times due to reader opinion. Thanks again. The second parts coming.