User blog comment:Puddinginthesky/Breaking Dawn, Care to Review?/@comment-1534883-20101205035259

1. Yes 2. Hell no 3. Hell no 4. Jacob, Sam, Bella, Edward 5. Hell to the *bleepin* no 6. None I don't think 7. Only read it once, but sometimes reread certain parts I wasn't sure of 8. Hell no 9. That's a tough one. Jacob was so different in BD, especially after he imprinted, and I HATED it, SO freakin much. But I'm a very loyal person and he still remained my favorite character regardless, but I really liked Seth in BD. So both of them I guess. 10. Kinda sorta. She did kind of give her the most attention. 11. If you're the main character, then everything will go your way. No matter how much crap happens. 12. Trash it and start all over. I'd probably rewrite it in a way that Bella and Jacob end up together. :P But if it HAS to be Bella and Edward then: Jacob calms down and slowly starts a relationship with Leah, Bella actually CAN'T control herself and she constantly needs help, Bella and Jacob still have feelings for each other somewhat, Jacob still doesn't like Renesmee but tolerates her for Bella's sake, THEY ACTUALLY FIGHT THE VOLTURI, they win but some people die like Brady, Collin, and Carlisle :'(. That'd be really sad if Carlisle died, but it would make sense. He dies and leaves Edward in charge of the family.