Talk:Demetri/@comment-86.176.124.82-20130317212937/@comment-108.3.191.211-20130713095101

I 2 chapters of this. Its in character, but its doesn't seem to fit Twilight. Jessica is annoying. The grammar is annoying, and I don't think the Voluturi would keep Jessica for shits and giggles because she doesn't really have anything they would want....I just couldn't get into it.