User blog comment:Meraella/My fanfiction!/@comment-2072316-20110502200018

Volturi was exactly what I thought when I read the first few paragraphs, so heads up on that! Okay, I expected Twilight, so this might be a little unfounded, but.. It's both good and not that good, depends on whether you want it to have suspense or be relatively clear. I don't think there was any suspense needed here, so you're good to go. The ending.. I like this part: "the violence and cruelty in his voice made it very clear: he wanted to destroy me,..." Somehow the sound of this like I imagine it makes me want to read further.