User blog comment:Scarly/Um... I thought I would ask first/@comment-4722499-20120702155155/@comment-4722499-20120702160216

Ofcourse, you don't have to be a professional. But, you seem obviously more talented! I know that for a good story, there always have to be character devolopement. The tone has to be precise. Conflict is major. Grammar really important. Spelling, obviously,lol. But some little help would be great. Vocabulary ain't so good for me, if you know some, that would be great! Yay!