User blog comment:VampiresAndWerewolfsareAwesomeAsHell23/Edward's Diary/@comment-66.138.59.115-20130412193706

For fanfiction this wasn’t so bad. I could see Edward saying a lot of this, especially the metaphor of a drowning person washed ashore and given a second chance for life. However, Alice would never tell Edward that if she didn’t have Jasper, that she’d want him. Edward and Alice Cullen are like brother and sister, in fact they are legally brother and sister. EVERYONE knows what the Taj Mahal is. As worldly as Alice is, she’d know what the Taj Mahal is. The story is quite melodramatic, but for the most part, I could see this as something Edward might say or feel since he’s melodramatic himself.