Talk:Life and Death: Twilight Reimagined/@comment-5385060-20151125113657

I'm reading this book, and I think the point of it failed. I still think exactly the same about Bella. (She is a pathetic little Mary Sue, who does nothing but mope after Edward. He constantly has to save her all the time because she is a damsel in distress. And she does whatever the hell she wants, and ditches all her friends the minute the Cullens like her.) Reading Life and Death changes nothing. Because it isn't the same story, but the main character being a boy. The only difference I've found, is that I can get into it and not lose the will to live. Since my favorite in the series was Short Second Life of Bree Tanner, where Bella played such a miniscule part, that she was only there to show where Bree's story connected to hers.

The foreword by Smeyer was just full of pathetic excuses. I'm willing to bet she knew exactly how much Edward stalked Bella. Midnight Sun probably would have pretty much wrote itself. She had ten years to write and finish it. Instead she openly admits there was no time to finish it, so that meant she put hardly any time and effort into this book. And it shows, big time. I am however glad that "holy crow" hasn't popped up yet.

All the characters are described like really bad Japanese anime characters. Some of their names are rediculous. I mean, what the hell is Jessamineand Royal? Those names totally stand out. Edythe itself is completely weird. Why not Edith, or even better Edwina?

I could go on and on, but there still are plenty more chapters to read yet, before I can comment further.