User blog comment:Kirby Phelps (PK)/Alternate Ending: If Bella and Jacob kissed in New Moon/@comment-5137295-20120706103643

Awesome story! But Jacob wouldn't have saved Bella from Laurent in New Moon because she wouldn't have gone there looking for one of her 'Edward' delusions, so Bella wouldn't have been there. This basically destoys one of the building blocks for your alternate ending.