User blog comment:Savannah Star/Regarding Fifty Shades and Twilight.../@comment-3984470-20120827025131

All I'm saying is...

1. I don't think it should be allowed to publish modified fanfiction to the public as a novel. I mean, at least without stating it was inspired by something, at least.

2. The actual writing part still sucks. Lots of "flushing," lots of "crap," etc.

3. I wouldn't know about the BDSM lifestyle (I'm not into that), but I guess if stuff like spanking is included, then people shouldn't call their relationship abusive. ...I mean, did they not know what they were getting into when they saw that this is an erotic / BDSM book?

4. You can read better smut online by virgin teenagers for free. FanFiction.net has no limitations.