User blog comment:Twihard-fanpire/Grace's Story Chapter 8 (Twihard-fanpire fanfiction)/@comment-2070074-20100905181214

Honey, you truly have a gift! This chapter is the best yet, I can't believe they have a car crash! I hope they don't die, but people rarely kill off the main character so I'm guessing not. It's fantastic, and I'm definitely staying tuned for the next chapter!! One suggestion: maybe you should have described Grace meeting Seth's family in more detail, perhaps devoting a scene to it. Other than that I loved it, keep it coming!